The Disease: Chapter Two- The Story

The Disease: Chapter Two- The Story

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Stranger: The story starts about a year ago on June 30th 2009....
Stranger: Doctor Blake Hoover had just moved into town in the old abandoned mansion that used to belong to the Knacks.
Me: Yes I know about Doctor Hoover and how everyone thought she was a bit strange with the red eyes and all.

Stranger: Well did you know that I was engaged to her? Or ummmm.... I don't know... Maybe the fact that she gave us the disease that turned us into these freaks of nature and she is planning to do it to more people just like us!? Oh and maybe the part that the place we are in right now is her basement!!!! His voice escalated as he got angrier and angrier...

Me: Woah, woah, woah... Hold on just a minute... Your Lee Lender? The most elligable bachelor in town after you dumped the doctor... Wow this town must have low standards...

Lee: Hey! I didn't use to look like this and you left out the most important thing in your rant right there

Me: what?

Lee: My dissappearance.... Oh I don't know about a week after I broke up with the physcopath upstairs...

Me: Okay.... I'm getting confused now, can you just take it from where you left off...

Lee: I will continue the story but I'll skip past the boring part.

Lee: Ok so... I was extremely happy back then. Correction, Blake and I were very happy or at least I thought so...

Lee: After our engagement something snapped and she started to unravel as I watched. Suddenly she was not the Blake that I fell in love with, she was a different woman who would freak out when there was nothing wrong...

Lee: She would yell at me saying that everyone in town was better looking than her and higher up on the social ladder than her and she said that she would get revenge on everyone who fell into those two categories. She said that everyone except for me and all people who she looked better than and considered herself to be better than. Me for a different reason than others. Me because she loved me...

Lee: Shortly after she started telling me this crap, I broke up with her. I just couldn't take it anymore. She had gone insane and I just couldn't love her anymore. That's what got me to where I am today... Standing here, trapped in the basement with you and soon the rest of the townpeople that she feels need to pay.

Me: Well that still doesn't explain how we got this way!

Lee: I know! I was getting to that part.... I wasn't finished yet and if you would just shutup I could finish!

Me: Ok, ok Mr. Pushypants...

Lee: Mr. Pushypants? he said with a grin slowly spreading across his face

Me: I'm sorry! I'm not very creative when it comes to insulting people by calling them names! Would you just continue the story please...

Lee: After the breakup she became even more crazy and more obsessed with getting revenge on everyone who was better than her in one way or another. She started making different concoctions that would have different effects on the people she used them on. Then she discovered this terrible horrible disease that makes us look like this! The only other thing that she had to do was set it loose and give herself the antidote. People with the disease started dropping dead and she realized that she had to perfect it to make sure she could get the revenge she was looking for...

Lee: Soon she was able to perfect the disease so that it would not kill people off but keep them alive looking like this so that she could keep them in this room down here and observe their behavior. The only problem with this disease was that she had to administer it to people herself and she couldn't just put it out into the atmosphere. The reason why was because she couldn't find an antidote and if she caught it she would suffer like the rest of us..

Lee: She started by luring me into her basement and administering the disease to me. The next thing I knew I was waking up in here. Then the same thing happend to you. THE END.

Me: Not much of an ending I thought stories were supposed to have a happy ending...

Lee: Maybe there will be one... Eventually

Before I could reply, Lee was on the ground, gasping for air...

Me: Lee!!!! Please don't die! But it was too late to do anything... Lee was dead and I was all alone in this place...

So... What do you think??? Please comment, good or bad. I want to know how to improve....

The Disease: Chapter One My eyelids fluttered open and I propped myself up on the bed. I soon realized as I broke into a cold sweat that I did not wake up in my cozy king sized bed in my plush bedroom at my house. No, I woke up in a foreign and scary room with only faint memories of the hours before I what? Fell asleep? Passed out? What happened to me?

I soon became a little more aware of my surroundings and realized without a doubt that I was not the only person in this place and that many more people were going to end up here other than the stranger that I saw. Or at least I thought I saw! Where did he go!?

I then saw a mirror and couldn't resist the urge to check myself out. I regretted this descision as soon as I got close enough to the mirror to see myself. I was horrified! Green skin! Dark green hair! Pitch black eyes! What happened to my gorgeous skin, beautiful long blond hair, and blue eyes that were so clear that you could see into my soul! I had to find out immediately!

Suddenly I was not alone and the man that I saw earlier was staring at me with a peculiar look on his face. Horror maybe. I planned to stay away from him as he kinda scared me but the curiosity started burning inside of me and I couldn't resist going over to talk to him.

Me- Where am I? Who are you? How did you dissappear a minute ago? And most importantly, what happened to me?

Stranger- Woah! Slow down there lady! I'll tell you but it's a LONG and TERRIBLE story. It's all true though.........

So...... What do you think of the first chapter so far? Please comment! I wanna know how you feel about it..... Thanks for reading!