Life Goes On
~Chapter 2~
"Mommy!?" Jessica's panicked scream filled my ears, yet I was unable to respond. Unable to even stop the choking sobs that spilled out of my throat.
Worried, Jessica ran out of the room and returned a few minutes with tears silently dropping from her eyes. Someone else was with her though, and when I tried to see through the thick wall of water escaping from my eye, I realized it was Frankie. Frankie. That girl was my everything, next to Jessica and... Nick... It hurt to even think of his name and it just made the tears start coming down faster and the sobs to get progressively louder, and more terrifying to the onlookers.
"Jessica, sweetheart, go call the ambulance for your mother," when Jessica didn't immediatley answer, Frankie broke under pressure and shouted, "NOW!" the tone of Frankie's voice just made her start crying even more and sobs started to escape from her throat too, but she did as she was told.
As soon as Jessica left the room, Frankie ran up to me and guessed exactly what was wrong, "Nick isn't gonna make it to his party, is he sis?" I couldn't do anything but nod and then the tears started brimming over her eyes too.
"It's gonna be ok, it's gonna be okay sis," Frankie said as soothingly as possible, but it sounded like she was trying to convince herself as well.
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I woke up in a room with white walls. White everything, except for the small amount of blood on my sheets and hospital gown. Hospital gown... When I became oriented enough, I realized where I was, a hospital... Why was I here? What made this happen? And most importantly, who am I?
Ooooohhhhh cliffhanger. By the way the last paragraph was not Elena's point of view. I'm sorry if this is kind of confusing, but in case you missed it, Frankie is Elena's sister. Thanks for reading and please comment and tell your friends! :D
Oh, me likey!
ReplyDeleteThis was very well written and I think I know who that mystery person is... ;)
P.S. I'm Storyteller1010; there's an error and I can't comment with my LJ account. :)
Who is Jessica? Her daughter? Is she a teen or a kid? I imagine her as a kid. Sorry, this comment is going nowhere. The story was good though! :)
ReplyDeleteJessica is like 12 years old, maybe a little younger. and yes jessica is her daughter.
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